Fic: The Weight of Water (Dean/OFC, Sam)
Sep. 15th, 2008 09:36 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
twasadarkI WROTE HET!!!! Does anyone even READ het in this fandom? Or any fandom? Anyhow, here it is ...
Title: The Weight of Water
Author:![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
twasadark
Pairing: Dean/OFC, Sam
Rating: Adult
Words: 5300
Prompt: This is my attempt to incorporate angst and romantic gestures in a fic. Which sorta came out as schmoop and h/c. Written forviolettestars in the ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
spn_summerlove challenge.
Summary: Dean and Sam are hunting a phantom mustang herd on the property of spitfire ranch owner Mandy O’Malley. She can’t stand Dean. He finds her irritating and oversensitive. So of course they must have sex.
Note: Fic named after the song whose melody I can’t get out of my head. It quite possibly has nothing whatsoever else to do with the story. Does that matter? Thanks tomizbhaven13 for the lightning fast beta.
Read here
Title: The Weight of Water
Author:
twasadark Pairing: Dean/OFC, Sam
Rating: Adult
Words: 5300
Prompt: This is my attempt to incorporate angst and romantic gestures in a fic. Which sorta came out as schmoop and h/c. Written for
violettestars in the spn_summerlove challenge.Summary: Dean and Sam are hunting a phantom mustang herd on the property of spitfire ranch owner Mandy O’Malley. She can’t stand Dean. He finds her irritating and oversensitive. So of course they must have sex.
Note: Fic named after the song whose melody I can’t get out of my head. It quite possibly has nothing whatsoever else to do with the story. Does that matter? Thanks to
mizbhaven13 for the lightning fast beta. Read here
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Date: 2008-09-15 05:42 pm (UTC)NO.
J/K. But I don't.
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Date: 2008-09-16 07:41 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:43 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-15 06:22 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-15 07:00 pm (UTC)*dies*
I WROTE HET!!!! Does anyone even READ het in this fandom? Or any fandom?
If they don't it's because no one writes it. :P
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-15 08:45 pm (UTC)Nicely written, very sarcastic which gets Dean's inner tone very well, imho. I'm gonna read the rest tomorrow.
Err.... I DO read het, but I've been asking myself the same question cause nobody seems to read my fic *pouts*
I read yours, you read mine? ;) You'll find it in the first four entries in my LJ. Just in case you want to read something long-ish.
Now I'm off to bed but I promise to read the fic tomorrow and leave you a detailled review.
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-15 10:23 pm (UTC)LOL, me likes :-)
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:44 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 01:00 am (UTC)Hell yeah they do!!!! And you need to write more of it. ASAP.
I loved Robin. She was a perfect match for Dean. Great mix of snark, sexiness, and hotness. A bit of hurt!Dean is always good, too.
Keep het alive!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:45 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 02:21 am (UTC)Typically, I don't. Exceptions include: threesomes, where it's backstory for eventual wincest, or genderswap.
but um...this fic was really awesome and it's on my very short list of non-wincest het fics that I actually really like. I think it really helped that Mandy's not an airhead, that she gives as good as she gets, you know what I mean?
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:46 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 02:48 am (UTC)And it doesn't hurt when the fic is as awesome as this! Mandy was a good, well-rounded character, and a great match for Dean. :D
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Date: 2008-09-16 07:47 pm (UTC)(Gives me an opportunity to use this, one of my most favorite icons!!)
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 02:50 am (UTC)I actually read het & I don't read Wincest although I may enjoy RPS
BUt sometimes I feel sad because nobody reads het cuz I didn't get much response on my het fics which made me decide not to write SPN fanfiction again
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:49 pm (UTC)Thanks so much for your kind words about my story - big hugs to you!!! And I'm sorry for the lack of response on your het fics. I think that even the most popular het authors get very few comments. Don't give up writing!
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 03:26 am (UTC)mmmm.
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:49 pm (UTC)yes reading het :)
Date: 2008-09-16 02:22 pm (UTC)Great!
Thank you!
Re: yes reading het :)
Date: 2008-09-16 07:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-16 08:40 pm (UTC)I still like your over-all writing style a lot. It's easy to read, witty but also not too simple, just has the right amount of everything, if that makes sense ;)
Oh, God. “Dean, you were practically delirious. You probably hallucinated all kinds of things."
Dean's mouth twisted wryly. “I didn't hallucinate the fact that you kissed me.”
Haha, yeah, Dean can tell the difference between a real kiss and a hallucination ;) Nice one.
Oh Jesus, Mandy! What are you doing, girl? *headdesk*
Haha @ Dean's reply though "I liked it" *g*
...with your swaggering and smirking and talking to my chest instead of my face,...
*gives Mandy a t-shirt saying "I have eyes you asshole!" :D
His eyes flickered from her chest to her face. “I talk to your, uh …”
“My boobs?” She asked, trying not to sound sarcastic. “Yeah. You’re pretty obvious about it.”
LMAO that's so typical Dean haha. Great.
And awwww, so cute. It's absolutely adorable how Dean can be such a macho jerk and such a gentleman at the same time.... eerrr yeah I know it sounds stupid but it's true *g*
God, she looked like she had been thoroughly fucked. Which, okay, she had been
God, I so want to be her! LOL
*fans herself* Oh God.... now it's getting hot in here. And mind, I was freezing my butt off earlier because it got darn cold.
I like your extra portion of realism here, because we all know not every woman comes every time; in fact many have problems with that.
I somehow think it'll work this time...
Yep, I was right. And ooooh God. Oh my fudging God! LOL. Woah, that was really, really hot. It was oth naughty and sweat, very sensual, very atmospheric. Really good sex scene, and believe me, I've read countless bad ones ;)
Good job!
And did I mention that I WANNA BE HER?
He kissed her, long and lazy and sweet. And the hay and stables? Well, they were just going to have to wait.
OR he could teach her a fourth thing in the hay :D
Hey, this was really good. Really enjoyed this fic. I think you got Dean very well, and I also liked Mandy. I could identify with her a little (Okay, I secretly imagined her to be me *coughs*), and she was an interesting character that seemed less one-dimensional than Cassie, although they seem to be of a similar type (the bitchy attitude and the arguing e.g.).
Really nice fic. Enjoyed it a lot :)
I think I need a cold shower now, though.
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Date: 2008-09-19 03:55 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-17 02:32 am (UTC)The only thing I don't read is Wincest. It gives me the creepies. And I think I must be the only one in this fandomo who's like that. But to each his own.
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Date: 2008-09-19 03:58 pm (UTC)Thanks so much!!
The only thing I don't read is Wincest. It gives me the creepies. And I think I must be the only one in this fandomo who's like that. But to each his own.
LOL - I'm sure it feels that way! It took me awhile to warm up to Wincest because incest in real life? EWWWWWWW But hot fictional sex written by awesome authors? Yum. :-) There is a strong Gen outpost, tho. And I do love me my Gen, probably even more than anything else. I always go back to it.
Anyhow, thanks so much for your kind words. &hearts
(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-18 09:29 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-09-19 03:59 pm (UTC)Awww, thanks! Glad you liked it. What did you think of the ep? I LOVED it!!
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Date: 2008-12-23 04:30 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-12-23 04:49 am (UTC)Thanks for your kind words. They definitely made me smile!
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Date: 2009-02-21 11:13 am (UTC)*whistles*
Thanks for that. :D
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Date: 2009-02-22 07:19 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-01 03:25 am (UTC)(so yes, people do read het in this fandom!)
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