Poetry

So I haven't written poetry in more than twenty years, but for some reason have felt inspired to do so lately.  It's probably because of calamitycrow 's poetry recs.  I don't even know if what I'm trying to communicate here comes across.  I've never taken any sort of poetry class, and just one literature class - I'm a historian all the way, lol.  Perhaps this is glaringly obvious. Anyhow, feedback on punctuation and word choice and meaning or the lack thereof is so so welcome!  Even and especially the critical kind. :-)

( Feathering )

( The Throb )