Fic: Three Days Later

[twasadark]

Title: Three Days Later

Author: twasadark

Pairing: none; Gen

Rating: PG

Words: 440

Summary: Sometimes, Dean forgets.

Notes: I’ve never written a coda before, but I suppose that’s what this is.  I so loved “Dream a Little Dream of Me” that I just had to write this little bit … Unbeta’d. 

The road winding through the red rock canyon

Comments

[mlebayre.livejournal.com]

Very nice!

[yasminke.livejournal.com]

Very nice, and a beautiful backdrop for the piece (I love southern Utah).

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks, hon! Yeah, I just returned from southern Utah - :-)

[iamstealthyone.livejournal.com]

Nicely done. It’s good to see the boys enjoying a rare moment of quiet.

Favorite lines:

Dean must have sensed his unspoken words. “Oh, God.” He groaned. “Are we having a moment?”

*g*

“I’m not letting go, Dean,” Sam said. “Neither are you. Remember?” He gave Dean’s shoulder a gentle squeeze.

Lovely.

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks, hon! Love your comments! And btw, I'll be recording your podfic soon. It's next on my list. :-)

[lovetheguys.livejournal.com]

Serene, lovely, perfect. Love, Robin

[iamstealthyone.livejournal.com]

And btw, I'll be recording your podfic soon. It's next on my list. :-)

Yay! I'm looking forward to it. :)

[erinrua.livejournal.com]

Beautiful, atmospheric, and such a perfect Sam and Dean scene. A pity they won't film in Utah to give us just this. :-)
Cheers ~

Erin

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Oh, love your icon! So perfect! And thanks so much for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed this little scene. :-)

[twigletmoo.livejournal.com]

Awww, this was brilliant. I loved Dean's first line - so Dean-like!

Great job.

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

So glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting! :-)

[may7fic.livejournal.com]

Yes, Dean, you two are having a moment and it's just wonderful :).

This was a truly lovely little piece of writing. the atmosphere and Sam's actions, beautiful and peaceful and I so wish this for them.

Thank-you for giving it to them and for sharing it with us!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little story - and that you took the time to let me know. :-)

[carolej126.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this! It's true that Sam has to find his contentment and happiness in the moment, because he has no idea what's to come. I loved how Dean understood that, and allowed Sam the physical contact that he needed. Thanks for sharing!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm so happy that you enjoyed it. :-)

[cybel]

A lovely, quiet moment. Beautifully done.

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, hon!

[sylvanwitch]

What a beautiful vignette! I love the visual imagery of the first few paragraphs, the way you use Sam's POV via invisible lens to give us a visceral sense of the place and time. I love, too, the dead-on accuracy of their voices here, the way that they talk to each other, so in-character, in-canon, so right. Bravo!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much for your lovely comments! I'm so glad that this resonated for you. :-)

[dysonrules.livejournal.com]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! SWEET!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

*beams* You know me, a big softie. :-)

[faithintheboys.livejournal.com]

That was gorgeous. I love how you actually make me see everything and it's so calm and says so much even with the little bit of dialogue. I loved it!

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks so much, hon! I'm so glad you liked it! :-)

[lark_ascends]

Simply beautiful.

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks, hon!

[irnan.livejournal.com]

How lovely! And poor Dean, being made to have a moment *chuckles*

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Glad you liked it! I so love making Dean uncomfortable!

[wellew.livejournal.com]

This is really sweet.

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :-)

[gayeld.livejournal.com]

Oh, that was very nice. I loved Sam's quiet appreciation of what he does still have. (Of course, post-3.16 it's a little heartbreaking as well.)

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

[vamp-ress.livejournal.com]

Beautiful. Quiet and thoughtful!

(And yay, I'm back listening to podfic!)

[twasadark.livejournal.com]

Aww, thanks! Yay for podfic!! I've been catching up on recording my latest stories recently as well. &hearts