Fabulous story -- you did an excellent job of fully developing all the characters. Even though I was mostly on poor Tristan's side, I was compelled by your construction of Jensen and Alona's relationship. The world was also very well realized.
Definitely looking forward to a possible sequel for this and more Tristan!
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Date: 2011-06-11 03:08 am (UTC)Definitely looking forward to a possible sequel for this and more Tristan!