This is a story I didn't know I needed to read until I opened up the link and started reading it. I love how you captured the texture of the period and of the locales. And I love your characters, the way they unfold and the paths they take through the story.
But I especially love your use of language. It's beautiful, so evocative and compelling. This is a fantastic story and if I had the ability I would make the entirety of fandom read it.
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Date: 2011-06-10 01:14 am (UTC)But I especially love your use of language. It's beautiful, so evocative and compelling. This is a fantastic story and if I had the ability I would make the entirety of fandom read it.