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twasadark ([personal profile] twasadark) wrote2008-11-30 09:13 pm
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Fic: Double Jeopardy (Dark Angel, R)

Title: Double Jeopardy

Author: [info]twasadark

Fandom: Dark Angel

Genre/Pairing: Het (surprise pairing, but of course features Alec)

Rating: R for violence, gore, and some sex

Summary: The sight of her is like a sucker punch to the gut, unexpected and brutal.

Notes: My late entry for [info]da_halloween. This was supposed to be a crack fic, except that crack fic is funny, right? This totally isn’t. Anyhow, the prompt was: 45. Genetics made them do it! Heat kicks in and Alec and another transgenic have sex. The prompt kind of … got away from me. Thanks to [info]amory_vain for betaing and enduring my whining.

 

Music: Thanks so much to [livejournal.com profile] ldyghstwhisprer who has been kind enough to work up a great ficmix and cover art for this story –  it's located HERE.

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[identity profile] counteragent.livejournal.com 2008-12-01 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, Alec gets hs happy ending! So sad about Joshua. :(

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading and commenting! I know, I killed poor Joshua! I love him, too. What's wrong with me???

[identity profile] joans23.livejournal.com 2008-12-01 07:53 am (UTC)(link)
WOW! That flashback of Alec crying in Logan's arms. Just, WOW. Amazing fic!

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!
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[identity profile] aaronlisa.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 02:36 am (UTC)(link)
This was a really interesting fic. I really enjoyed reading it.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. &hearts

[identity profile] swanseajill.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
That was excellent. Great characterisation and totally believable. I even bought Logan hugging Alec, which shows how well it was written. And although killing Joshua was a bit shocking, it really fit with the dark tone of the story.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 03:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for your kind words! This was a tough one to write because it is so dark, I suppose. One of the reasons I love Alec is that he's so happy-go-lucky ... except that I ruined that in this story, lol.

[identity profile] dhark-charlotte.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
This was amazing. I can't believe you killed Joshua. Besides Max, his death is probably the only thing that would devastate Alec to that degree. I'm still weepy even though I'm happy that Alec and Sam are together.

Good job.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, sorry for making you weepy! I really like Joshua, but for some reason this story called for his grisly demise ... I'll have to write a shmoopy story in which he lives happily ever after. Except that I don't really do shmoop that well.

Anyhow, thanks for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me. &hearts

[identity profile] serena64.livejournal.com 2008-12-02 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Great story. I wonder if it could work out? Sounds like Sam and Alec are in a similar place, so maybe they would be able to work out their issues with each other. Should certainly do them both some good just trying.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 03:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for your kind words! I like to think that this version of Alec and Sam are perfect for one another because of their brokenness.

[identity profile] quirkies.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 06:44 am (UTC)(link)
uhmm, wow! i literally have tears on my face right now. and yes, i'm a sucker for all things alec, but damn his reaction to joshua's death and the way you wrote his pain and need for max were powerful. poor boy! fabulous story!

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-04 03:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'm sorry for making you cry!! I'm madly and passionately in love with him as well - I don't know why I torture the poor guy so ... Thanks for reading and commenting - I'm humbled and pleased that my words touched you. &hearts

[identity profile] kimmer1227.livejournal.com 2008-12-22 02:52 am (UTC)(link)
First off. You killed Joshua!!!!!

Besides that BIG fact, I loved this story. Oh, Alec. I was so sad for him, pinning away for Max. Him breaking down with Logan. Damn!

Hopefully he'd really learn to be with Sam, and not have her just be Max-redux. I think he was heading in a good direction.

Great job! Besides, you know. Killing Joshua!!!

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2008-12-22 11:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry for traumatizing you about Joshua!! I'm BAAAAD, huh? Poor Joshua just had to buy the farm for the story to work.

I'm glad you liked the rest of the story, though. It is a dark piece. I'll have to write something a little lighter next time!

Thanks for reading &hearts

[identity profile] spastic-visions.livejournal.com 2009-01-25 07:20 pm (UTC)(link)
This is fantastic! I never really considered pairing those two together before but you really really make it work.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2009-01-25 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww, thanks so much for your kind words! I'm so glad you liked it. &hearts

[identity profile] leviathan0999.livejournal.com 2009-12-09 01:49 am (UTC)(link)
Incredibly difficult, but also moving, and I was stunned by the power of your prose. I hope Alec and Sam can find their way back to TC and be part of that community. Alec has real friends in Max and Logan, and I hope that he and Sam can come to see it.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2009-12-10 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
Wow! Thanks so much for your great comment. I'm so happy that the story moved you.