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twasadark ([personal profile] twasadark) wrote2010-02-20 02:32 pm
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Ficlet: Beautiful Mistake (Dark Angel, Max/Alec)

Here, have some fluff. :-)

Title: Beautiful Mistake
Fandom: Dark Angel
Pairing: Max/Alec
Rating: PG-13
Words: 550
Prompt: Max/Alec, heat totally counts as a stupid mistake


She could tell just by the knock on the door who it was.  A peek out the peephole confirmed her suspicions.  Alec, looking anxious. 

She took a deep breath before opening the door.  His hands were jammed in the front pockets of his jeans and he looked strangely vulnerable.  The two of them stood there for a long moment, just staring at one another. 

"Max," he said, a soft murmur of sound from even softer lips.  She remembered the feel of those lips tracing her own, the gentle press of them at the thin skin beneath her ears and the humid puffs of breath as he thrust into her, sweet and hard and oh, so good. 

"Hey," she greeted him, and stood aside to let him into her small apartment in TC.  It was actually a supply closet, still crammed with medical supplies, but it also had a dresser and a mattress and she didn't need much, really.

Of course Alec had already been here, had laid her down on that cot and made love to her with a fervency and intensity that still made her blush, three days later.  The things they had done together was blush-inducing enough, but it was the things he'd said that kept coming back again and again - "Wanted this for so long, baby," and "Never thought I could have this," and "M'crazy for you."

He glanced guiltily at the cot and then back at her, dropping his eyes to the floor and swallowing noticeably before he cleared his throat and said, "I came to apologize.  I'm not that guy, the one that takes advantage of you during your heat.  I mean, technically I suppose I am that guy because of what happened the other night, but I don't want to be that guy any more.  I want to treat you right, like you deserve to be treated, and I know I don't have the best track record when dealing with women but that's all going to
change--"

He was talking too quickly, like he expecting her to bust his chops.  Not an unreasonable expectation, given her past behavior.  She stepped toward him, reached up and pressed a finger to his lips, stilling the stream of words immediately.  "Hey.  I'm the one who asked you over the other night, remember?  I did that for a reason.  You didn't take advantage of me."

He looked at her warily, obviously puzzled.  "I ... didn't?"

She shook her head.  "I make stupid mistakes from time to time, Alec.  But that, the other night?  It wasn't a mistake."

He looked at her, really taking her words in.  He swallowed again, and when he spoke his voice was rough.  "I'm glad.  Because I'd like this to be something, you know?  Something more than just one night, as awesome as that night was."

She moved closer, and his arms slipped around her waist like they belonged there.  Her heart thundered in her chest like a war drum and her mouth was dry, but she pushed past the discomfort and said what she'd been waiting for say for days now.  "Yeah, I'd like this to be something, too."  

[identity profile] pat-san.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 12:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh God... How can a fic this short be sweet and sensual and breathtaking at the same time is beyond my understanding, but you did make that possible. I'm stunned, really.

Thanks so much for sharing this ^_^

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 12:43 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, what a wonderful comment! I'm so glad you liked it!

[identity profile] reci-cup.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
Bravo!!! And what PatSan wrote. ;)

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm so glad you liked this piece. :-)

[identity profile] shadecat.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 04:58 am (UTC)(link)
I so rarely get my Alec/Max fixes anymore.
*sniffle*
THANK YOU! *sob*

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
Whenever there's a hiatus with Supernatural I usually turn to a little Max/Alec to get me through. :-) Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] joans23.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*chains you to the computor to write Max/Alec forever and ever and ever*

Beautiful!!

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-21 07:37 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL! I guess that means I should get busy and write some more. :-)

[identity profile] x5vale.livejournal.com 2010-02-22 08:24 am (UTC)(link)
awawwawawawwwwww! I miss Alec so much and the Alec/max shippers too.

Thanks for this, I loved it.

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-24 12:33 am (UTC)(link)
I know what you mean - I miss Alec, too! I think I love him even more than poor broken Dean ... or maybe I just love everyone Jensen has ever played. :-)

Thanks so much for reading!

[identity profile] x5vale.livejournal.com 2010-02-24 07:38 am (UTC)(link)
I love him as much as I love Dean...

[identity profile] dulcedeusex.livejournal.com 2010-02-22 10:16 am (UTC)(link)
Wow... lovely piece of writing!

I totally dug the wanting to change bit of Alec's speech.

Short and sweet! xx Dulce

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-02-24 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I can't seem to get enough of Alec, especially when it's hiatus from Supernatural! :-)

[identity profile] lucklessforhim.livejournal.com 2010-04-18 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
So...SUPER late comment, but...

I really REALLY loved this! I think I have your M/A ficlet story on alert on fanfiction.net, but I never log in anymore to leave reviews. :-(

Anyhoo, I JUST NOW found the Max/Alec comm over here and I thought, "Oh great! I can comment and use the icon that I never get to use!"

So: LOVED this! Thanks so much for posting! I hope to read more from you in the future!

[identity profile] twasadark.livejournal.com 2010-04-18 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow! Thanks so much for your kind words! I'm so glad that you enjoy my little Max/Alec obsession, lol. As for more in the future ... I can almost guarantee it! :-)