ext_77153 ([identity profile] wyntertwilight.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] twasadark 2009-05-31 10:34 pm (UTC)

I'm so glad we got this rather than the 1st and 3rd prompts, because Alec/Logan, really? *undignified snort*

I loved this. I loved how Max's concern at hurt!Alec came through despite her snark, and how he picked up on it, and because of that, pushed through with telling her how he felt. I really liked the way she reacted, beating him and then just giving into her feelings, while he held her - it's just raw and real and so much like them! I could picture it perfectly. This was just a gorgeous piece, and so well written, as always. Great work!

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